Dear Luna I hope you are well. I am pleased to inform you that we would like to offer Yiran Jie (Jessica) a full boarding place in Year 10 from September 2024and we would be delighted if she accepts. Please find her offer letter attached, together with an acceptance form. Please follow this link where you will find some further documentation. [Please could you pass this link to Jesscia’s parents and ask them to read the documents carefully]. To accept the place, we ask for 2 copies of the acceptance form to be completed, returning one copy to us and paying the deposit by 18th April 2024 as stated in the offer letter. If you have any questions, please do let me know and I shall be glad to help you. I look forward to hearing from you. With warmest wishes, Naomi 回复Naomi ,Jessica 接受Offer,并在这两天完成定金支付,随附上acceptant form
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Dear Luna
I hope you are well.
I am pleased to inform you that we would like to offer Yiran Jie (Jessica) a full boarding place in Year 10 from September 2024and we would be delighted if she accepts. Please find her offer letter attached, together with an acceptance form. Please follow this link where you will find some further documentation. [Please could you pass this link to Jesscia’s parents and ask them to read the documents carefully].
To accept the place, we ask for 2 copies of the acceptance form to be completed, returning one copy to us and paying the deposit by 18th April 2024 as stated in the offer letter.
If you have any questions, please do let me know and I shall be glad to help you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
With warmest wishes, Naomi
回复Naomi ,Jessica 接受Offer,并在这两天完成定金支付,随附上acceptant form
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Dear Naomi,
I hope this message finds you well.
I am pleased to inform you that Jessica has accepted the offer. We will complete the payment of the deposit in the next couple of days and will also send the acceptance form.
If there are any further steps to be taken or documents to be filled, please let us know.
Thank you for your assistance and we look forward to the upcoming school year.
Best wishes, [Your Name]
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Dear Luna, Just wanted to send you a quick message to say that it has been a pleasure working with you during Jessica's application. Although we are disappointed to hear that she's not joining us in September, we wish her all the best in her new school. Looking forward to our collaboration in the future. Best wishes, Asu reply asu
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