Dear Luna, Thank you for your email and your interest in Haileybury for Xinlei Angel Yao. Having reviewed her details and her reports she certainly looks like a strong applicant and we would be very happy to consider her application. Please encourage her family to complete our online Registration Form and arrange payment of the £200, non-refundable Registration Fee. We will then be in touch in the Autumn term with further details on the Assessments which are due to be held in November 2024. The Assessments will include a 3 papers, Maths, English and a Free Choice paper as well as a CAT4 and an interview. We will also request a reference from her current school closer to the time. Please encourage Xinlei and her family to have a look at our website for some further information on the admissions process and should they have any further queries please do let me know. Would they be able to visit the school at any stage in the Autumn term? We have a couple of Open Events being held in the Autumn term, or we could arrange an individual tour if the Open Event dates are not suitable? Please let us know when they would be available and we will arrange a tour for them. Thank you for your interest in Haileybury and I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards Carla 用英文回复Carla ：我刚刚已经未Xinlei 填写了online form,但还没在线付款，希望可以通过transfer的方式付， 想问问是否可行？ 因为不确定您是否能看到我提交的信息？ 希望能尽快得到您的回复，谢谢！

Dear Admissions Officer at Caterham School, I hope this email finds you well! This is Luna from Hyde Global Education. We currently have a good candidate named Xinlei Angel Yao, who is looking for Year 12 entry in Sep 2025 (full boarding). The attached documents includes her passport page, current school report, academic excellence award and UKiset report. Student name: Xinlei Angel Yao Nationality: Chinese DoB: 31 JUL 2009 Current School: Shen Wai International School (Shenzhen, China) Angel is an excellent student with a positive communication attitude and is proficient in English, expressing herself logically. She is not only dedicated to her studies but also has a deep passion for art and music. She is very keen to be able to join a top British school like Caterham for her Sixth Form studies. We highly recommend this potential candidate and please advise if we can register her directly. Regards, Luna Chen 一周时间过去了，Admissions 还没回邮件，写一封英文邮件问问是什么原因？希望得到反馈

Angel is an excellent student with a positive communication attitude and is proficient in English, logically in expression. She is dedicated to her studies and also has a passion for art and music. She is very keen to be able to join a top British school like Canford for her Sixth Form study. We highly recommend this potential candidate and will soon register for her on the school's official website! 上述这段话用英语表达的更自然，连贯。可以适当添加连词

Dear Mr Yao and Mrs Yang, Very many thanks for the Registration Form submitted online and for the registration fee of £200, which we have received for Angel. I have placed Angel on our list for potential entry into the Lower Sixth Form in 2025 as a Boarder and share detailed information about this year’s Sixth Form application process via this link. This information clarifies the difference between ‘Scholarship entrance’ and ‘Test and Interview’ entrance and provides further details about each element. There are a number of milestones and important deadlines in the Sixth Form process, and I highlight these as follows: 14 September Sixth Form Visiting Day – if you haven’t already visited or would like to visit again, please do sign up to attend via the link if you would like to attend this visit opportunity. It is also possible arrange an individual visit if this date is not convenient. 30 September Deadline for submission of the Sixth Form Route Form and scholarship forms (our scholarship details are online). In the event a Scholarship entrance is sought, please be aware that the value of an Uppingham scholarship is typically only a 5% remission on fees. Larger awards are means tested. 1 December Date offers are made. Offers remain subject to the condition of securing a minimum of three ‘7’s and three ‘6’s at GCSE (for those who are taking GCSEs). 8 December Deadline for replies to offers. The Sixth Form curriculum is explored further in the Sixth Form Options Guide at the foot of this webpage. The first twelve pages of this online document are particularly helpful and also refer to the GCSE entry conditions and subject specific tariffs for A level. Our website acts as our prospectus, and Uppingham’s YouTube channel offers some useful additional introduction. We would be delighted to host you here on a visit. Details regarding our Visiting Days can be found via the link. Individual visits can also be arranged by contacting Sarah Heading ([email protected], +441572 820611). Please see here a link to a booklet of our Terms and Conditions for your file. Yours sincerely, Charlie Bostock MA (Oxon), MSc (Oxon) 请用英文回复Charlie感谢确认Xinlei已成功注册，我们已经按照指示填写提交了Sixth Form Route Form，然而我们选择的是在overseas考试，是否可以在中国考试？British Council Offices或我们公司？

Dear Luna Thank you for your e-mail and confirmation, please can you confirm if Angel Yao will require a child student visa or if she has her own visa? Kind regards Alison Hill 用英文 回复Alison 以下内容： Dear Alison, Sorry for the late reply! I can confirm Angel Yao will require a child student visa. 我们期待在guangzhou British council 11月7日 考试，已提交预约，并把您的信息（Alison Hill，[email protected]）提供给了British council ，our booking request is being processing. 这是英国文化教育协会广州中心的邮箱：[email protected]

Dear Luna I hope you are well. I am pleased to inform you that we would like to offer Yiran Jie (Jessica) a full boarding place in Year 10 from September 2024and we would be delighted if she accepts. Please find her offer letter attached, together with an acceptance form. Please follow this link where you will find some further documentation. [Please could you pass this link to Jesscia’s parents and ask them to read the documents carefully]. To accept the place, we ask for 2 copies of the acceptance form to be completed, returning one copy to us and paying the deposit by 18th April 2024 as stated in the offer letter. If you have any questions, please do let me know and I shall be glad to help you. I look forward to hearing from you. With warmest wishes, Naomi 回复邮件：表达很高兴收到offer，并礼貌的询问是否可以延迟deadline