Dear Admissions Officer at Caterham School, I hope this email finds you well! This is Luna from Hyde Global Education. We currently have a good candidate named Xinlei Angel Yao, who is looking for Year 12 entry in Sep 2025 (full boarding). The attached documents includes her passport page, current school report, academic excellence award and UKiset report. Student name: Xinlei Angel Yao Nationality: Chinese DoB: 31 JUL 2009 Current School: Shen Wai International School (Shenzhen, China) Angel is an excellent student with a positive communication attitude and is proficient in English, expressing herself logically. She is not only dedicated to her studies but also has a deep passion for art and music. She is very keen to be able to join a top British school like Caterham for her Sixth Form studies. We highly recommend this potential candidate and please advise if we can register her directly. Regards, Luna Chen 一周时间过去了，Admissions 还没回邮件，写一封英文邮件问问是什么原因？希望得到反馈

Angel is an excellent student with a positive communication attitude and is proficient in English, logically in expression. She is dedicated to her studies and also has a passion for art and music. She is very keen to be able to join a top British school like Canford for her Sixth Form study. We highly recommend this potential candidate and will soon register for her on the school's official website! 上述这段话用英语表达的更自然，连贯。可以适当添加连词

Dear Luna, Thank you for your email and your interest in Haileybury for Xinlei Angel Yao. Having reviewed her details and her reports she certainly looks like a strong applicant and we would be very happy to consider her application. Please encourage her family to complete our online Registration Form and arrange payment of the £200, non-refundable Registration Fee. We will then be in touch in the Autumn term with further details on the Assessments which are due to be held in November 2024. The Assessments will include a 3 papers, Maths, English and a Free Choice paper as well as a CAT4 and an interview. We will also request a reference from her current school closer to the time. Please encourage Xinlei and her family to have a look at our website for some further information on the admissions process and should they have any further queries please do let me know. Would they be able to visit the school at any stage in the Autumn term? We have a couple of Open Events being held in the Autumn term, or we could arrange an individual tour if the Open Event dates are not suitable? Please let us know when they would be available and we will arrange a tour for them. Thank you for your interest in Haileybury and I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards Carla 用英文回复Carla ：我刚刚已经未Xinlei 填写了online form,但还没在线付款，希望可以通过transfer的方式付， 想问问是否可行？ 因为不确定您是否能看到我提交的信息？ 希望能尽快得到您的回复，谢谢！

Good morning Luna, Thank you for your reply - it looks like we have Yilin Chen, Junxi Feng, Ziyue Gu and Jingtian Liu as students from Hyde Global Education - we received the applications from Feng Shuyu. Apologies, I will forward these students to her. Please see updates below: 英文回复Sally邮件感谢这么快的更新！我划线的4个学生确实是我们Hyde的，抱歉我没有反应过来，我以为讨论的是14人这个团队。

Dear Deborah, Thank you for the prompt response and the documents provided. Regarding the 3-week course starting on July 28th, could you please amend 'Hyde Global Education' to 'Bazhou No.2 Middle School'? As Zhiqiang Wang is also our client, not a representative of our company; he is a teacher at Bazhou No.2 Middle School. Additionally, there is an error in Zhiqiang Wang's passport number on the visa letter. Kindly make the necessary corrections. Thank you for your attention to these matters. deborah没有回复以上邮件，请用英文催促她尽快发送更改好的visa letters。另外，附件是lead teacher 的police check，请查收！

所选文本: Dear Luna, I hope you are well. I would like to assure you that Coco is registered for Year 10 entry in September 2025. Our Admissions for September 2024 have been extremely busy, so we had not yet had an opportunity to begin the admission process for 2025. Please do accept my apologies for the slight delay. Could you please provide some dates and times that Coco would be available for interview and to sit exams for week commencing 3rd September 2024? Could you kindly provide me with a current school report and once school begins we will request a reference from them? I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Steph Lawrence 用英文回复一下steph： 感谢确认Coco已经成功注册！随附是Coco最新的current school report！ 自从访校后，Queenswood成为Coco唯一想去的学校，她非常喜欢Queenswood的氛围。为了作更充分的考试准备，Coco可能会在11月左右参加学校的entrance exam and interview，届时我们会提前跟您约时间。