Encouragingly, on a practice essay done under time limited conditions for homework, Andy had left himself time to check back over his grammar at the end, which resulted in a much lower rate of errors than his first drafts usually contain. If he keeps this up it should improve on his main weakness (grammar). 请用中文总结并润色以上内容

Grammar continues to be Andy’s main issue when writing. However, we have focused on a few key areas of improvement and Andy seems to understand these. 用中午、简短的话告知家长老师对Andy的建议

Samson identified Question 5 of Paper 1 as his biggest weakness in his mock exam. Therefore, we have primarily focused on this, especially as it carries the highest marks. Samson is hindered by his speed of scanning the text, and some occasional slowness to pick up the implied tone/perspective. He also needs more practice at writing up the response in a manner that gains the most marks. However, he has been paying close attention in the lessons and should improve with time. He has clearly understood everything we’ve discussed together. 请简洁地用中文总结以上内容

Pronunciation and lack of a wide range of vocabulary which doesn’t bode well for comprehensions,Submit homework and focus on enjoying lessons. 请用中文总结以上内容

Zhaohan main challenge continues to distil the texts which she reads in order to work out their meaning. That she continues with her IELTS practice, reading textual excerpts and summarising them in 4-5 sentences. This will be a specific focus of Zhaohan’s homework. 请用中文总结以上内容

which step in the writing process requires checking grammar rules