请给以下国际学校面试的自我介绍，进行润色，使其更符合国际学校面试要求以及一个高中水平学生的口语习惯的表达。 Hello everyone, my name is Allen and I am 16 years old. I was born in a big loving family with a younger brother and a younger sister. Being born in such a big family cultivates my qualities of love and independence. For example, when my parents are busy, I would help them look after my brother and sister and sometimes I also help them with their study. As the big brother in the family , I always try to set a good example for my younger brother and sister. Although there are many children in my family and my parents are always busy with their work, they place a high value on my education and encourage me to explore my interests.From the age of five they began to sent me to learn football, baseball, basketball,badminton,dance, piano and so on. Out of these ,I love basketball best. Because it can help me to build up my body and release my stress. More important learn how to work with other  teammate. And I own my achievement to their support. When I’m free I like reading and solve math problems. When I was in primary school,  I also participated in Olympic mathematics competitions and won some awards,which helps me gain a sense of achievement and motivates me to major in economics in the future. I’ve heard that ULC can provide students with a great curriculum allowing students to further explore our academic passion. Besides, ULC has a great culture and a stimulating environment for personal growth and development. As for me, critical thinking is really important. So it is truly the right school for me, and I really want to be a part of it. When I told my parents that I wanted to go to ULC, they were very supportive. I love my parents and I really hope that I can bring them the good news about the interview.Thank you!

请给这个国际学校英文自我介绍面试稿润色，使之更具有特色。Hello ,everyone, my name is Sihan Chen and I am 16 years old and I’m grade nine. My mom is always supportive and placing a high value on my education. She encourages me to explore my interests. From the age of six, I began to learn the piano. When I was 8 years old, I performed “Yellow River Concerto" with the Shenzhen city Philharmonic Orchestra. It’s a precious experience.I learned how to communicate and cooperate with other instrumentalists and the conductor. It has strengthened my confidence to pursue a career in piano. Over the years , I also won several prizes like the International Piano Competition in Wiesbaden, Germany. In my free time, I enjoy playing football. It’s a good way to release stress and makes friends. Sometimes I also enjoy exploring new things, such as diving.It That’s one of the reason why I choose to study in VMAA. I want to be a pianist in the future as for me ,freedom is really important.You know imagination needs rooms to develop. Besides, VMA has a great culture and a stimulating environment for personal growth and development.So it is truly the right school for me.

以下是对采访问题“你参观墨尔本的美术馆吗？”的（虚构的）回答。您想要分析此响应。确定至少三个可用于描述响应的不同部分的代码（单词或短语）。 “我从小就经常去墨尔本的画廊、博物馆之类的地方。你知道，学校远足，或者有时和我的家人一起。我现在不常去，因为我经常忙于工作，如果我见到朋友，我们更有可能去酒吧闲逛。有时如果有大型演出，我会自己去。我不介意花钱买门票，因为每年只有一次。”

下面是一组雅思IELTS口语考试的对话。考官问出问题，考生回答。你来优化考生的回答，使答案能拿到极高的分数。你可以更改句式使句子结构更合理，也可以更改用词使其表达更地道，或修改任何英语错误。但请注意，你不必更改所有表达，也可以保留一些被合理使用的表达。 Do you like singing? Why? Definitely yes. I sing song whenever and wherever I want to. I have a fondness for music and rhythm, the lyrics can also transfer affections as well as poems, as which is a revival of poems I believe. Have you ever learned how to sing? In fact I haven't learn it intentionally, but my mom does. She always likes to share the new skills that she learnt to me, but I really rather to be a layman, just following my own skills. Who do you want to sing for? Absolutely for myself. It's me who really appreciate my voice and can conscious of subtle changes of my singing. It's a divine gift that I give to myself every single day, as with no need to show it to others because I can really do without any applause or admiration. Do you think singing can bring happiness to people? Indeed, as I mentioned earlier, music and lyrics can deliver other's affection to you, as painting and literature have done. Imagine that you can reach one's emotion even after he or she died over tens or hundreds of years. That's an extension of human being's civilization and that's why we call them art.

对这一段话进行评论和回复大家好，很高兴认识大家。我叫李晨懿，本科专业是英语和教育。所以这个学期是学习商业课程的开始。因为我对商业理论几乎一无所知，所以我希望能有一个好的开始，获得金融方面的基础知识。评论中提到了四个可能影响我们金融体系的风险，中国房地产行业进一步疲软，全球商业房地产市场的状况，金融资产价格的无序调整，以及来自全球和国内金融体系之外的威胁。 中国房地产行业的进一步疲软可能导致房地产价值下降，从而影响贷款人的资产负债表。此外，还可能影响国内外投资者，使他们不愿意在中国房地产行业投入更多资金。商业房地产的低迷意味着经济的疲软，导致投资和支出减少，从而可能导致金融市场的动荡。金融资产价格的无序调整可能导致各种资产价格的快速下跌，给投资者和金融机构造成损失。更重要的是，它还可能导致流动性紧张和无法偿还贷款的结果。源自全球和国内金融体系之外的威胁在扰乱金融市场运行方面发挥了一定作用，并导致了金融损失。

关键人物的简介或采访此人应该是艺术家、评论家、理论家、学者或 专门 在关注领域内工作的人。如果您正在撰写个人简介，请考虑此人的整个职业生涯（而不是一本书或一部电影）如何有助于我们对特定主题的理解。如果您正在进行书面采访，您需要写一个简短的介绍性段落，制定复杂且适当的问题供对方回答，然后写一个结论性段落。如果您正在进行录音采访（语音或视频），您仍然需要介绍和结论（您可以将其作为文字文件提交，或者您可以编写脚本并读出它，就像您在播客中介绍一个嘉宾），中间有大约 7 分钟的采访（我们建议您录制更长的采访并对其进行编辑以获取最佳片段）。字数： 书面访谈或个人简介 1200 字。录音：250 字的介绍、200 字的结论和大约 200 字的内容。其间录制了 7 分钟的语音/图像。