这个作文有多少词？然后用粗体把语言运用错误的部分标注，并在后面的括号里写出正确的内容：The bar chart below indicate the proportion of periodically phisical active men and women in Australia, within different age groups in 2010. Firstly, we could see that there is a little oscillation of percentage of active Australian in each age stage, which about 40% or 50% or so. When youth who age between 15 to 24, male did more regular activity, with 52.8%, than that of female, which is 47.7%. And when they reached the retiring age, 65 and over, male and female showed a similar performance. It shows that about 47% people, whether male or female, made regular excersice. However, during the four age spans between 25 to 64, which are devided by each 10 ages, female were far more likely to make excersice a regualar part of their daily life than male. The biggest gap between male and female occured in the 35 to 44 group. In this group, the percentage of female had reached to 52.5%, which extent similar female percentage to the following two age groups, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64, while merely 39.5% of male did in this certain group. Incidentlly, the peak of male's percentage among these four group is the eldest one, with merely 45.1%, which was fairly low digital comparing with female contemporarily. In sum, male performed more phisically active at an early age, from 15 to 24. But then female dominated the following 40 ages, namely four groups from 25 to 64. After that, they behavior were almost the same.

这个作文有 263 个词。以下是语言运用错误的部分和正确的内容：

"The bar chart below indicate the proportion of periodically phisical active men and women in Australia, within different age groups in 2010." 应改为 "The bar chart below indicates the proportion of periodically physically active men and women in Australia, within different age groups in 2010."

"Firstly, we could see that there is a little oscillation of percentage of active Australian in each age stage, which about 40% or 50% or so." 应改为 "Firstly, we can see that there is a slight fluctuation in the percentage of active Australians in each age group, which is about 40% to 50%."

"When youth who age between 15 to 24, male did more regular activity, with 52.8%, than that of female, which is 47.7%." 应改为 "Among youths aged between 15 to 24, males were more regularly active, with 52.8%, than females, who were at 47.7%."

"And when they reached the retiring age, 65 and over, male and female showed a similar performance." 应改为 "And when they reached retirement age, 65 and over, males and females showed a similar level of activity."

"It shows that about 47% people, whether male or female, made regular excersice." 应改为 "It shows that about 47% of people, whether male or female, exercised regularly."

"However, during the four age spans between 25 to 64, which are devided by each 10 ages, female were far more likely to make excersice a regualar part of their daily life than male." 应改为 "However, during the four age spans between 25 to 64, which are divided into ten-year intervals, females were far more likely to make exercise a regular part of their daily life than males."

"The biggest gap between male and female occured in the 35 to 44 group." 应改为 "The biggest gap between males and females occurred in the 35 to 44 group."

"In this group, the percentage of female had reached to 52.5%, which extent similar female percentage to the following two age groups, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64, while merely 39.5% of male did in this certain group." 应改为 "In this group, the percentage of females had reached 52.5%, which extended a similar female percentage to the following two age groups, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64, while only 39.5% of males