Detailed explanation for why a positiveaffective response is an important outcome ofexercisePoorly articulated explanation of why a positiveaffective response is an important outcome ofexerciseAppropriate references used as evidence Inappropriate references used as evidenceExercise-based modificationVeryGoodGood Avge Poor VerypoorThe specific modification is explained clearly It is not completely obvious what the specificmodification isAppropriate research is provided to supportthat the modification can influence affectiveresponsesResearch provided to support that themodification can influence affective responsesis not relevantA comprehensive critique of appropriateresearch is providedResearch evidence is not detailed enough, lackscritique.A detailed explanation for why themodification will influence affective responseis provided.The explanation for why the modification willinfluence affective response is not fullydeveloped.Exercise-environment or exerciserexpectation modificationVeryGoodGood Avge Poor VerypoorThe specific modification is explained clearly It is not completely obvious what the specificmodification isAppropriate research is provided to supportthat the modification can influence affectiveresponsesResearch provided to support that themodification can influence affective responsesis not relevantA comprehensive critique of appropriateresearch is providedResearch evidence is not detailed enough, lackscritique.A detailed explanation for why themodification will influence affective responseis provided.The explanation for why the modification willinfluence affective response is not fullydeveloped.Clarity and quality of writing andcorrect referencingVeryGoodGood Avge Poor VerypoorClear and fluent expression, correct grammar/ spelling throughoutClumsy and difficult to understand, muchincorrect grammar/spellingClear structure and use of headings Poor structure / use of headingsCitations / referencing style correct Incorrect citations / referencing styleMark (out of 30) General CommentsExplanation of the importance of a positive affectiveresponse to exercise /5Exercise-based modification /10Exercise-environment or exerciser expectationmodification /10Clarity and quality of writing and correct referencing /5