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Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her grammar and mechanics?In Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, Pip, a young orphan, is sent by his sister to the home of Miss Havisham, a wealthy, eccentric woman. There he meets Estella, a beautiful girl whom he falls hopelessly in love with. On one visit to Miss Havisham's, Pip encounters a boy who challenges him to a fight; wanting to impress Estella, he hits the boy. "I never have been so surprised in my life as I was when I let out the first blow and saw him lying on his back, looking up at me with a bloody nose", Pip recounts. Estella seems delighted and says to Pip "Come here! You may kiss me if you like".by using semicolons correctlyby fixing run-on sentencesby punctuating quotations correctlySubmit

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Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her grammar and mechanics?In Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, Pip, a young orphan, is sent by his sister to the home of Miss Havisham, a wealthy, eccentric woman. There he meets Estella, a beautiful girl whom he falls hopelessly in love with. On one visit to Miss Havisham's, Pip encounters a boy who challenges him to a fight; wanting to impress Estella, he hits the boy. "I never have been so surprised in my life as I was when I let out the first blow and saw him lying on his back, looking up at me with a bloody nose", Pip recounts. Estella seems delighted and says to Pip "Come here! You may kiss me if you like".by using semicolons correctlyby fixing run-on sentencesby punctuating quotations correctlySubmit

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The writer can best improve his or her grammar and mechanics by punctuating quotations correctly. In the text, the writer fails to use commas to introduce the direct quotes. The corrected sentences should read: "I never have been so surprised in my life as I was when I let out the first blow and saw him lying on his back, looking up at me with a bloody nose," Pip recounts. Estella seems delighted and says to Pip, "Come here! You may kiss me if you like."

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